You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter • say which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you due to your

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article about the city centres in our country.

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with, I want to thank you for

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a detailed overview of our capital as it is truly worth mentioning.

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, I admire your writing style and your ability to use language so beautifully.

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, I am totally disappointed with your opinion about our city centres.

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of all, they all have different backgrounds and histories as well as importance in developing our country.

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of all, the thing is not only about their past, but

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their visual look. Even though there are a lot of similar buildings, each city was built by a different architect due to which all houses have unique details which can be noticed only by a careful look.

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, you are invited to be toured through our town in order to understand how different and unique our cities are. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Daniel

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