You live in a small apartment building with a parking lot in back, and you often cannot find an empty parking space when you get home from work. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter • describe the situation • explain why it bothers you • suggest something the landlord could do to solve the problem Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..

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Dear Mr Smith, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter regarding the problem with the lack of parking spaces at our parking lot.

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free parking spaces at all after 6 pm. Since I work as a computer programmer, I can deal sometimes with overwork so there is no chance for me to park my car when I come home at 8 or 9 pm.

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a significant disappointment for me and my family because I have to park a car on the opposite side of the street from the house which takes a while to reach it.

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, sometimes it is

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out of free parking places so I am forced to leave my vehicle

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the other neighbourhood. I suppose it would be great if you consider an opportunity to widen our parking lot and make every parking place named and personalised due to which other neighbours would not be able to occupy it. I would really appreciate all the efforts you did to consider that issue. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Matt

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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