Some people say it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build housing. Do you agree or disagree?

In these Modern days,
plantation
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the plantation
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is more important in huge
cities
aorund
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around
the world.But it is widely known that
construction
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the construction
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of houses has been extremely increased in Major
cities
. It is agreed that plantation is significantly and
necessarly
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necessarily
necessary
important in towns and
cities
. In analysing,
Trees
play a vital role in the environment . as well as
trees
can be produced
abudant
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abundant
rains
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rain
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in
the
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apply
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nature .
Firstly
, Environment has been protected with more
number of
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apply
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trees
. If we plant more
trees
then
people can be
proected
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protected
by pollution.
For instance
, If any city or town
have
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more
tress
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trees
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,
then
they produce oxygen by consuming
the the
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apply
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carbon
di-oxide
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dioxide
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. Oxygen is very important to human
lifes
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life
lives
life's
to live and survive .
thus
this
is the vital role played by
trees
.
this
makes it clear that Tress are playing
the
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a
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vital role
to
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in
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proctect
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protect
the environment.
Secondly
, In any forest which has
many
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a many
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number of
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apply
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trees
will have more
rains
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rain
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compared with
cities
.If we plant and grow more
trees
in
massive
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a massive
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area
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areas
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, which will
result
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inresult
fromresult
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more
rains
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rain
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.
For example
,
Cities
are survived
with
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apply
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rains
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rain
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like
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and
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water is used for drinking, industrial and home need purpose.
Therefore
it is understood that
trees
are very important to give abundant
rains
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rain
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. To summarise, Plantation is very important mainly in
cities
to protect
the
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nature and serve
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needs
for
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the
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population. It is Agreed that Vegetation is very much
important
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more important
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to in
cities
and towns than the housing. After
thorough
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a thorough
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analysis
on
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this
subject. It is recommended that Planting more
trees
in towns and
cities
are main important than the construction the houses.
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