Many people use distance learning program to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as music attending college or university. To what extend do you agree and disagree?

Most

people

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utilize distance learning

program

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programs

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to educate at

home

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, but a few

people

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consider that it cannot bring the benefit as much

attending

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as attending

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college

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or

university

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. In my

opinion

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,opinion

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I think that it cannot bring the benefit as much

attending

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as attending

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college

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or

univetsity

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university

. I will put my thought into words in the forthcoming paragraphs. Nowadays most

people

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prefer to

study

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at

home

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rather than going

college

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or

university

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because they

are believe

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believe

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that

significiant

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significant

and

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apply

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, online learning is convenient ,as they will get

knowlegde

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knowledge

for example

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, most

people

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have duties at

home

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so they unable to attend

college

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or

unibersity

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university

but, they can conduct their online class as started by their

shchedule

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schedule

.Some

people

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think that better to

study

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at

home

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because they do not want to go

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college

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to college

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or

university

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.

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, it is clear that online education cannot replace the old

medhod

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method

methods

of teaching

also

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,

face to face

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face-to-face

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communication is crucial for the student

due to

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apply

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which

increase

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increases

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many

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knowledge and will become a better leader and speaker in the future

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for

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example,

people

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who cannot communicate with other

people

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this

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can damage to their career opportunities to my mind, online

study

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rather than should be got to

college

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or

university

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in recent times, anyone cannot

to

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apply

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study

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at

home

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becaause

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because

most

people

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prefer to go

colege

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college

or

universsity

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university

. In conclusion: I think that some

people

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prefer

to

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apply

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online education is beneficial for

the

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apply

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citizens I believe that students should be taught at

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university

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universities

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and

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college

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colleges

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because in recent times distance learning cannot replace the old methods.