You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive. Write a letter to the post manager. In your letter Give details of the situation Describe the documents Say what action you want the post office to take.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to complain about some

documents

which I sent

last

week via your service did not arrive at the destination place. These papers are vital for my

visa

extension and I cannot extend my

visa

status without presenting those

documents

Although

I can understand some delays because of the weather condition , I need to present hard copies to the

visa

officer . I put my official work permit and house agreement in one large envelope and labelled "

VISA

extension". I

also

included my current address and the Embassy address as well.

However

, I forgot to mention my mobile phone number . I would like you to trace my

documents

where they were stuck if it is possible . I will really appreciate your help because I do not have much time to resubmit my

documents

again. I am looking forward to hearing from you . Yours faithfully, Thomas

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

156 words

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