Some people claim that not enough of the wastes from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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citizens illustrate that rubbish from

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was not fully recycled, and the only solution to

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is by the government which legislate laws about recycling. Personally, I believe that with

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help, a great improvement can be seen.

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, it is not the only cure for the phenomenon of under-recycling. Legislation can be powerful for any

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the percentage of recycling. Punishments come after the legal requirements can be

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with money or imprisonment, which both had

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on people.

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, residents can gradually desensitise

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the punishments if the fine was not a big deal to them,

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the recycling rate will not decrease eventually.

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, we should progress the recycling rate with different aspects,

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as educational and technological viewpoints. Take schooling

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example, it can be an effective way in reducing waste if we enhance pupils in terms of environmental protection and the severity of global warming.

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, children will know how important

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recycling is.

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, technology can be helpful in the part of reducing waste. Engineers can develop systems that can simplify the process of recycling, which may increase the willingness of recycling

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residents.

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, scientists can invent some ingredients that can break down themselves without causing contamination.

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but not least,

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industry can manufacture good-looking eco-friendly products, which may lower the usage of disposable items

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consumers. Even though legislation can be influential to the percentage of recycling waste, I believe that there are still many solutions to

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legal requirements will not be the only way to fix the situation.