Your ID card has been stolen. Write to the Local Police Station, giving details of o who you are o what happened o ask what you should do to get a new ID card

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I lost my identification

card

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yesterday on the way to my accommodation from

college

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and would request you to issue a report against

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. I am a

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-year student at Cambridge University, UK, pursuing English honours and have been staying here for the

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two years. As I am an overseas student, I do not have too many local connections here, except my fellow students and

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staff.

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, on 20th December I was returning from

college

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to my accommodation via bus as usual. After reaching home, I realized that someone has stolen my wallet which includes my credit

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and id

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, I immediately called customer service and blocked my

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number, so that no one can misuse it.

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, unable to retrieve my identification

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Lastly

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, I would urge you to record

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incident, for your reference I have attached all the necessary details regarding the bus number, id number. In order to reissue the

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from the

college

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, I would require a copy of

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report.

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, request you to take it as a priority. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Aayushi Rawat

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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Your ID card has been stolen. Write to the Local Police Station, giving details of o who you are o what happened o ask what you should do to get a new ID card

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport system such as railways and trams. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this.

The best/ only way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that after the child begins his/her schooling their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?