Your ID card has been stolen. Write to the Local Police Station, giving details of o who you are o what happened o ask what you should do to get a new ID card

#id #card #police #station

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I lost my identification

card

yesterday on the way to my accommodation from

college

and would request you to issue a report against

this

. I am a

second

-year student at Cambridge University, UK, pursuing English honours and have been staying here for the

last

two years. As I am an overseas student, I do not have too many local connections here, except my fellow students and

college

staff.

Furthermore

, on 20th December I was returning from

college

to my accommodation via bus as usual. After reaching home, I realized that someone has stolen my wallet which includes my credit

card

and id

card

However

, I immediately called customer service and blocked my

card

number, so that no one can misuse it.

Although

, unable to retrieve my identification

card

Lastly

, I would urge you to record

this

incident, for your reference I have attached all the necessary details regarding the bus number, id number. In order to reissue the

card

from the

college

, I would require a copy of

this

report.

Hence

, request you to take it as a priority. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Aayushi Rawat

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

202 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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