Your ID card has been stolen. Write to the Local Police Station, giving details of o who you are o what happened o ask what you should do to get a new ID card

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I lost my identification

card

yesterday on the way to my accommodation from

college

and would request you to issue a report against

this

. I am a

second

-year student at Cambridge University, UK, pursuing English honours and have been staying here for the

last

two years. As I am an overseas student, I do not have too many local connections here, except my fellow students and

college

staff.

Furthermore

, on 20th December I was returning from

college

to my accommodation via bus as usual. After reaching home, I realized that someone has stolen my wallet which includes my credit

card

and id

card

However

, I immediately called customer service and blocked my

card

number, so that no one can misuse it.

Although

, unable to retrieve my identification

card

Lastly

, I would urge you to record

this

incident, for your reference I have attached all the necessary details regarding the bus number, id number. In order to reissue the

card

from the

college

, I would require a copy of

this

report.

Hence

, request you to take it as a priority. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Aayushi Rawat

Submitted by rawat.aayushi04061996 on Tue Dec 20 2022

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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Your ID card has been stolen. Write to the Local Police Station, giving details of o who you are o what happened o ask what you should do to get a new ID card

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Many manufactured food and drinks contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe the the best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. What do you think about this opinion?