Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the proportion of

crime

is higher. Some people hold that

prison

is the best choice that can decrease the number of crimes. I partly agree with

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am going to cite some compelling reasons. 

Firstly

, a large number of criminals in society leads to

menaces

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. For someone who has a criminal record, the rate they do it again is high and

danger

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for people. So, a place which makes for a memorable experience is more

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than ever. It helps them

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a clear lecture be instilled correct moral

behavior

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.

In addition

,

prison

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is a place

that

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where

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the system of punishment is created, and they can regret

about

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what they did before.

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, genocide is separated from

society

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that

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ensure

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citizens live in peace. 

On the other hand

, the opening of

prison

is become

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a burden

of

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the economy and education too. Some of

crimes

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the crimes

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who

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met a light sentence

,

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are the

bread-winter

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, so their family does not have enough money to bring up their children,

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in their children

commit

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the

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crime

too.

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that, the fee to pay for the jailer, cleaner,

food

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is the important reason that

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the

prison

become ineffective

,

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because we need to pay the tax for

crime

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the crime

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.  In conclusion, it has both aspect disadvantage and

advantage

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. And I think each nation has

their

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own reason, and

Prison'

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opening

is belonged

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to the rate of

crime

.