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With an increasing percentage of the population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?

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With an increasing percentage of the population communicating via the internet and text messaging,
face to face
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 communication will become a thing of the past, in my essay, I'll give discuss
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 topic and make
opinion
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 on it.
First
 of all, remote
contacting
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 means has developed since the nineteenth century, starting
from
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telegraph
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, followed by the Telephone, and the big breakthrough came with the internet in the twentieth century, internet brought the e-mail, but what really changed the means of how
people
interacts
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 together was the invention of the cellular and specifically the smartphone
in addition
 to social media applications and the texting apps,
such
 as Whatsapp and the similar stuff. All these
modernday
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modern-day
modern day
 technological advancements, made it easier to communicate with each other, regardless of the place and time, In the old
days
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day's
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people
 had to make some effort to find each other to talk to each other, now it's too easy and inexpensive
to
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. But does the advancement in the means
communication
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 technology
prevents
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persons
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 from sitting together?
,
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 as a matter of fact,
and
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from my point of view, it played a role in making individuals
becoming
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 more and more distant, even within the same family members. In my
Opinion
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, Yes, the advanced communication
technoloy
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technology
,
are
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 putting
people
a part
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apart
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,
however
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this
 is varying from one society to the other depending on how developed it is, it can be noticed in rich and
high income
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 countries, but in less-developed and low-income ones,
people
 still sort to old fashion ways.
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