It is believed that working in team enhances the skills better then working alone. Do you agree or disagree.

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Every individual has
its
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their
his
her

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own choice
weather
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whether

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they have to
work
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in a
team
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or alone.
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However
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,However

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it is believed that working in a
team
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is more beneficial than working
individualy
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individually
individual

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. I strongly agree with the notion of working in
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team
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a team

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as
one
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can learn
team
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leadership
skills
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, interpersonal
skills
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and many more, which are discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
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with, when someone works in a
team
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they can learn
teamleading
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team leading
team-leading

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skills
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, how to
divde
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divide

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task
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tasks

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with
one
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another and
also
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co-operate with each other. If
one
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team
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member has
lack
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a lack

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of
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apply

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knowledge about any part of the
work
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other
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others

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can help them, but in case you are working alone no
one
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is here
for
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to

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help you.
Moreover
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, companies hire people of different skill-set and assign each and every person a different
task
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which they to
work
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in
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on in

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a
team
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,
as a
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result
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,result

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there are more
chanches
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chances
changes

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to learn
diffrent
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different

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ways to
complet
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complete

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task
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tasks

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on time. Another advantage of working in a
team
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is
improvement
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the improvement
an improvement

The noun phrase improvement seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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of communication
skills
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. it is impossible to enhance
one
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's communication
skills
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working alone.
Furthermore
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, working
is
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in

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squad
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a squad

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relieve stress as it is difficult for
one
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person to handle
whole
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the whole

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project and submit
on
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it on

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time because when working in
group
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a group

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task
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is divided with
easck
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each

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group
memeber
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member
members

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and everyone can do their part,
cosequently
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consequently

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reduce
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reducing

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the burden and they can give their best output which will result in
overall
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the overall

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growth of an employee. to conclude, working in
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team
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the team
a team

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not only decrease the stress but
also
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teach plenty of other
skills
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such
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as working in a
team
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,listen other
people's
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people

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and
enhance
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enhancing

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team
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leading
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leadership

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and communication
skills
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and
give
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giving

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a chance to
work
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with different
talent
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talented

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people.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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