Some people believe that mobile phone conversations should be banned in crowded and social places. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The need for cell phones has increased dramatically over the

last

ten years.

Therefore

several philosophers argue that laws ought to be established to prohibit

people

from utilizing these devices to communicate

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street corners, while others consider that individuals ought to be able to talk on their

smartphone

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regardless of their location.

This

essay will examine both points of

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and

then

I will explain why I believe that

people

must avoid

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it in public places.

To begin

with,everyone ought to have the flexibility

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their handsets whenever they want. Certain folks assume that mobile users in free countries have the freedom to use their

smartphone

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whenever and whenever they want.

In particular

, they consider that mobile devices are necessary on occasion.

For instance

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first

point

that is

accomplished in the event of a medical emergency,

such

as an injury, is to dial an ambulance number, which is often the families' or caretakers' number;

as a result

, individuals should be given access to their handset in all circumstances.

Nevertheless

, utilizing a

cellphone

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in crowded areas can seriously compromise an individual's security notwithstanding the previous reasons.

Hence

,

this

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frequently results in catastrophes, which occur when

people

are engaged in a number of activities at once. As

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, when a commuter was strolling through a railway station and he had to answer the phone, his absence of concentration caused him to run into other residents.

In addition

to

this

, it is suspected that listening to several other

people

's conversations might be irritating. As those consumers recognize it unsettling to actually pay attention

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someone else's dialogue, which is sometimes justified as preserving their confidentiality, situations like these should be handled. In conclusion,each perspective has virtues of its own.

Although

, I maintain that utilizing a telephone when in a formal forum, especially one

that is

packed with

people

, ought to be prevented as it might lead to serious consequences and annoy folks nearby.