Some people believe that mobile phone conversations should be banned in crowded and social places. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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emphasise
conversations
should be prohibited in overcrowded and community sites. However
, some individuals can not support this
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people
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when
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of
humans
because mobile phone
conversations
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for
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by
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distract
another individuals
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, they can not hear any kind of laws. Therefore
, it helps to humans
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a public
the public
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Moreover
, when people
keep in touch with family members and close friends by telephone, this
situation
is disrespectful for
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to
humans
. Thus
, it is forbidden to bring the
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phone
into public places. For example
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a fine
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phone
for conversations
in overpopulated
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phones
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to
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for
talking
with their family. Change the form of the verb
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apply
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taking
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about any
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the conclusion
humans
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