Some people believe that mobile phone conversations should be banned in crowded and social places. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many
humans
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emphasise
that telephone
conversations
should be prohibited in overcrowded and community sites.
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, some individuals can not support
this
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necessary
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their
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or study. From my point of view,
people
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be
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use
the mobile
phone
where
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full
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humans
because mobile
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conversations
may
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for
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humans
. In
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and elucidated. On the one hand, some
people
said that
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firstly
humans
do not
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mobile phones
conversations
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in conversations
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crowded
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in crowded
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places like school or
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because if suddenly
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the telephone
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ring
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,
it's
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sound may be
distrack
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distract
another individuals
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.
As a result
, they can not hear any kind of laws.
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, it helps to
humans
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area
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.
Moreover
, when
people
keep in touch with family members and close friends by telephone,
this
situation
is disrespectful
for
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other
humans
.
Thus
, it is forbidden to bring
the
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phone
into public places.
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, in my nation,
people
should be
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fine
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for
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
which
use
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mobile
phone
for
conversations
in
overpopulated
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area.
On the other hand
, some
people
strong
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believe that,
first
of all, some students live far from their family members. So mobile
phone
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important
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to
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talking
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with their family.
Also
,
people
use
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mobile phones anywhere because they may be
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important calls. If they can not
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, it is more harmful
for
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humans
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life which is working in a large company.
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,
firemans
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always utilize mobile
phone
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phones
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for
talking
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taking
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any
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situation
because they received almost 95 per
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calls which are urgent in
situation
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of
people
. In conclusion, having
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weighted
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everything mentioned up and I can
came
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to
conclusion
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the conclusion
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that
humans
must
be
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use
the mobile
phone
for conversation another because they may be any
situation
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Disrupt
  • Infringe
  • Social rudeness
  • Public transport
  • Necessity
  • Convenience
  • Emergencies
  • Personal freedom
  • Designated areas
  • Compromise
  • Context
  • Advocating
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