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Do you know the 50-60% of the process to get you
weight
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under control is the awareness you have on your
calories
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? In
this
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video you will be able to answer these 2 questions... What is
calorie
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? and why having them counted will help me with my
weight
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?
Calories
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is... The amount of energy in an item of
food
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or drink is measured in
calories
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. When we eat and drink more
calories
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than we use up, our bodies store the excess as body fat. If
this
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continues, over time we may put on
weight
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. Undestanding and managing the
calories
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(
food
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) will make the 50-60% of your progress
for example
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: If
Danny
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's intention is to lose wight so
then
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he needs to have a
calorie
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deficit (descrease
calories
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intake) plus increasing how much
calories
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he can burn(exercises)
Danny
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(backgroud) was not always obese and it did not gained over 80lb in one week it took few years of not be aware of how much
calories
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(
food
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) he was eating and when he thought (at 60lb over ) that it couldnt go worse bum 83lb but lucky him now is learnig how to have a
calorie
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deficit ( what to take in) and he is more aware of his
calories
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(
food
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) the average adult woman expends roughly 1,600 to 2,400
calories
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per
day
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, and the average adult man uses 2,000 to 3,000
calories
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per
day
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. now examples of good
Calories
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(
food
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) managing that
Danny
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is learning :
Danny
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male 30 years old having these numbers in consideration he changed from cosuming 5000 to 6000
calories
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per
day
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to a new
calorie
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deficit process to a 1500 to 1800
calories
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per
day
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what are the 1500 to 1800
calories
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that Eddy consumes everyday? 90% of his
food
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is meat and fats(protein) 10% of his
food
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is veg and some fruits(carbs) He fast everyday from 7pm to 11am(5 eggs claire at 7am) and his first meal is lunch time about 400ca en meat(protein) broccoli and salad 150ca and about 75ca rise for a total 600ca 4pm mini lunch chiken nuggets 250ca with salad 100ca 7pm dinner time Tuna 200ca with multligrain cookies 100ca and 4 egg (egg whites) 100ca for 400ca
Danny
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was able to lose 60lb in less than 7 months replacing bad
calories
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source for good
calories
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sourse. anyone who wants to lose
weight
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follow
Danny
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's formula and if Carla wants to gain
weight
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do the opposive of Eddy and take A LOT
calories
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!
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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