Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do. What are the problems associated with this? What is the best way to achieve a better balance?

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lifestyle
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and other parts of life is escalating at an alarming rate.
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is bringing a state of depression among the masses and in
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too. There are
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of reasons
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possible solutions can be recommended too which are discussed as follows. In
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to the issue, one reason that can be stated is the lack of organization in
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's lives. In support
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reason, a fact known is that the world has always been altering and developing.
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,
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of that, a higher demand for more obligations not only in
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's ordinary duties but
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in their
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could have been observed. Considering
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, it becomes evident that those who are less coordinated will confront trouble. Another problematic cause is being unrealistic.
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, if someone works for ten hours a day,
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he should not expect himself to be
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the same day as well as devoting time to his family. So stressful is
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expectation, that can result in serious health disorders
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the mentioned
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imbalance meant
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with a brighter mind, many
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solutions can be helpful to curb
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menace. One
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the solution is planning. If
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prioritize their
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not only will they surprisingly enhance their function at
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, but
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they will save a considerable amount of time which in return helps them to create a suitable balance between their
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and other parts of their life.
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claimed by him that he could not have encountered
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success and balance in his life without his "
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" list.
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employers should reduce the working hours, so that the employees find an
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opportunity
to rest and administer their non-
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related duties.
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acquiring a sense of being realistic can introduce many beneficial results, including a balance in lifestyle. To
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conclude
, solving a global issue is not easy but
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efforts of the
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,
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control can be taken over the
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with the
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aforementioned
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measures. I perceive that everyone should come forward to mitigate
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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