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Unhealthy eating has a negative effect on both individuals and the society in which they live. Some people think that the government should tax unhealthy foods while others believe that a “fat tax” is unfair and unnecessary. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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 habits play a pivotal role in the health of individuals. Consuming unhealthy foods would pose a threat to both individuals and the community. Whilst there are numerous restrictions that can be applied over the quality of
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, there are some people who think that heavy
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 must be imposed on
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 products.
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 essay will discuss both views and my viewpoint will be shared. To commence with, adding an increased percentage of
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 on junk snacks is a straightforward approach. Authorities assessing the
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 and mishandling of authorities. To conclude,
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 adding a higher
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 on junk
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 products is a good solution, the question remains on the ability to include
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 initiatives in the current system .
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 I do not agree with the concept of adding
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 amounts,
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, in my perspective, government and
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 departments must define quality check standards on all edible products that are available in the market and ensure that any product that does not meet the criteria will be banned from selling.
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