n the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In current society,
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online learning has gained more popularity, as people find it more suitable
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whenever they want rather than attending classes. I
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this
trend brings with it, countless disadvantages
such
as
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lack of communication and
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. The main reason for my disagreement towards studying online is the lack of direct communication.
Therefore
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to communicate
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with colleagues and
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lecturers
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,
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may cause
serios
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serious
psychological problems
such
as
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depression
and isolation.
Although
the commuting time is lowered, It is undeniable the fact that socializing helps in preventing these issues.
As a result
, the student should participate in offline courses as it aids to enrich his spiritual part.
For example
, during covid,
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of pupils,
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who attended
online classes, claimed that it
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affected
them negatively.
Moreover
, even if the advancement of technology might have brought with it benefits
such
as curbing the environmental problems caused by increasing numbers of vehicles,the necessity to
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by a teacher should not be neglected.
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is because not only
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that the teacher emits, which the internet and computer
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unable to do, but
also
the capacity to distinguish
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strongest and
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weaknesses
weakness
points.
Therefore
, he may help the pupil to overcome the problems more easily, simply by explaining
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/her. To cite an example,
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was struggling with my
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IELTS
writing task 2, only after
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attended physical classes
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passes
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the exam. To conclude,
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offline courses play a crucial role in acquiring knowledge efficiently and
also
to overcome the mental issues caused by
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lonelyness
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loneliness
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