n the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In current society,

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online learning has gained more popularity, as people find it more suitable

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whenever they want rather than attending classes. I

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this

trend brings with it, countless disadvantages

such

as

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lack of communication and

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a teacher's

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. The main reason for my disagreement towards studying online is the lack of direct communication.

Therefore

,

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the impossibility

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to communicate

face to face

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with colleagues and

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lecturers

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,

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may cause

serios

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serious

psychological problems

such

as

depresion

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depression

and isolation.

Although

the commuting time is lowered, It is undeniable the fact that socializing helps in preventing these issues.

As a result

, the student should participate in offline courses as it aids to enrich his spiritual part.

For example

, during covid,

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of pupils,

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who attended

online classes, claimed that it

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affects

affected

them negatively.

Moreover

, even if the advancement of technology might have brought with it benefits

such

as curbing the environmental problems caused by increasing numbers of vehicles,the necessity to

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by a teacher should not be neglected.

This

is because not only

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that the teacher emits, which the internet and computer

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unable to do, but

also

the capacity to distinguish

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strongest and

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weaknesses

weakness

points.

Therefore

, he may help the pupil to overcome the problems more easily, simply by explaining

him

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/her. To cite an example,

i

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was struggling with my

ielts

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IELTS

writing task 2, only after

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attended physical classes

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passes

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the exam. To conclude,

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offline courses play a crucial role in acquiring knowledge efficiently and

also

to overcome the mental issues caused by

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lonelyness

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loneliness

.