Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Financialllll behaviour it has been a well-discussed topic recently in our society. Many
people
claim that
this
issue is caused by the economic and financial system.
Nonetheless
, others explain that lack of financial education may be the problem of bad debt on
people
. In
this
essay I am going to explain what kind of actions can be carried out to avoid
this
conduct.
First
, buying things unpayable is a real trouble that it have the world's economy due to these measures destroy banking and commerce environment along with the personal finances who get into a indebtedness.
For instance
: Many
people
seek a loan to purchase something because they don´t have the
money
to pay it at the moment.
Consequently
, they will pay more expensive
this
item since they have to pay loan's interest, so these
people
won´t give
money
back to the bank.
Therefore
, these persons will stick in an unaffordable debt until somebody bent them
money
.
On the other hand
, I believe that
this
behaviour can be solved with many intiatives.
For example
: I strongly think that financial education can help
people
for avoiding debt, and unnecessary bank-loan.
In addition
, educating in
this
topic is the key to teach to public that you should have a healthy finance before to spend your
money
in unserved things. Another action is bank would improve their loan systems through better tools
such
as risk management and machine learning algorithms. To conclude,
although
,
this
behaviour is common in our society, and the reasons are for lack of information, in my view,
this
issue can be resolved with more education in schools, high-school and even universities.
Moreover
, with the develop of technology
this
conduct will be prevented and more
people
won´t get into debts
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