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In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

#countries #food #outweigh
Squabbling over Fast
Food
 is interminable in today's aeon. Nowadays, Fast
Food
 became now cheaper in many nations. Controversy exists as it whether it's advantageous or not to an impediment to society. In
this
 essay, I will weigh up the benefits and the drawbacks alongside my credibility with a befitting paradigm.
To Begin
 with, there are myriad reasons to agree with the meritorious side. The
First
 and Foremost reason is that fast
food
 is more convenient for working people because they don't have enough time to cook
food
 for themselves and others.
Although
, chemical substances are added to fast
food
 to preserve a long life,
As a result
, it's unhealthy
food
to
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the
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human beings and
suffer
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 from various diseases. According to a recent survey, 67% of people are dying from
the
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cancer and heart attack
in
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at
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 the early
ages
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.
Furthermore
, children are tempted
to
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by
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the
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fast
food
 because of
tasty
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the tasty
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 and
refusing
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 to eat unhealthy foods.
Besides
, Industrial companies make money from promoting fast
food
 at low cost.
On the other hand
, fast
food
 contains protein, fibre and so on. It's safer to consume the
food
 and boost the nutrition power in the body. In Short, the inducement fall of its bright side is self-evident. To
synphsize
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synthesize
, owning to these stated reasons, I'm
prefoundly
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profoundly
 convinced that
cons
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 of
this
 fast
food
 overshadow the cons.
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