Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,
traveling
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around the world has become a famous activity among
people
. Some claim that visitors should integrate into local
culture
and follow locals’ activities, while others think that the locals should accept cultural differences. In the following essay, I will show both sides of the issue and conclude by explaining my own view. It is claimed that visitors should try and follow the local
culture
and
behavior
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. To start with, when foreigners try to behave the same as locals, the original
people
there will feel respected and are more willing to welcome them to visit.
Moreover
, some traditional small
countries
may easily be influenced by other strong
countries
.
This
is the reason why many traditional languages or skills have disappeared eventually due to the impact of foreign nations.
As a result
, some argue that visitors should not bring their own
culture
there and should try to follow and learn from the local
people
to prevent fragile
culture
from vanishing.
On the other hand
, the host
countries
should not refuse cultural differences.
To begin
with, there is always so much to learn from other regions. The local
people
and their government can learn new things from communicating with other foreign
countries
. By doing
this
, they can improve their drawbacks and make progress.
For example
, Japan’s cleanliness and the well
behave
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of its inhabitants are well-known, so many
countries
and their citizens around the world would like to imitate that to improve themselves.
In addition
, cultural conflict is not always a bad thing.
This
means it sometimes can stimulate one’s nation to become better. In conclusion,
this
issue is clearly a double-edged sword, I think I would take a more balanced view. The reason is that the locals need to protect and preserve their own
culture
and the
travelers
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should open their minds to give different cultures a try, but it is
also
important for the host nations to open their doors to accept
culture
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shock.
Therefore
, I personally believe that both foreigners and local
people
should accept each other.
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