Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,
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around the world has become a famous activity among
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. Some claim that visitors should integrate into local
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and follow locals’ activities, while others think that the locals should accept cultural differences. In the following essay, I will show both sides of the issue and conclude by explaining my own view. It is claimed that visitors should try and follow the local
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and
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. To start with, when foreigners try to behave the same as locals, the original
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there will feel respected and are more willing to welcome them to visit.
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, some traditional small
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may easily be influenced by other strong
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.
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is the reason why many traditional languages or skills have disappeared eventually due to the impact of foreign nations.
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, some argue that visitors should not bring their own
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there and should try to follow and learn from the local
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to prevent fragile
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from vanishing.
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, the host
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should not refuse cultural differences.
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with, there is always so much to learn from other regions. The local
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and their government can learn new things from communicating with other foreign
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. By doing
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, they can improve their drawbacks and make progress.
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, Japan’s cleanliness and the well
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of its inhabitants are well-known, so many
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and their citizens around the world would like to imitate that to improve themselves.
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, cultural conflict is not always a bad thing.
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means it sometimes can stimulate one’s nation to become better. In conclusion,
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issue is clearly a double-edged sword, I think I would take a more balanced view. The reason is that the locals need to protect and preserve their own
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and the
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should open their minds to give different cultures a try, but it is
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important for the host nations to open their doors to accept
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culture
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shock.
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, I personally believe that both foreigners and local
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should accept each other.
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