Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world's meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world's meat consumption? What kinds of problem might such measures cause.

Nowadays,
people
are eating various foods
such
as vegetarian as well as non-vegetarian.
However
,
meat
production
requires more land as compared to crop manufacturing.
Consequently
, few
individuals
think that a large amount of land is becoming scarce, that's why few
people
think that usage of
meat
should be reduced. So in the forthcoming ,
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I will discuss what steps can be taken to reduce all nation's
meat
consumption as well as some problems that can arise from the
measures
.
Firstly
, by discussing the
measures
, the
government
can try to make
people
understand to reduce non-vegetarian eating.
Moreover
, the
authorities
can make
person
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explain that
meat
production
requires more farmland than crop
production
and it will lead to less availability of cattle feed.
In addition
, politics can make
people
aware that all
individuals
will not get basic products
such
as milk, paneer and curd as well if cattle will not get a proper volume of feed.
Therefore
, it is one of the
measures
discussed above that the
authorities
can take to reduce
meat
consumption.
Furthermore
, another measure that the
government
can take is that they can impose
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huge
amounts
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of taxes on finished
meat
products.
Moreover
, taxes can make
individuals
lower their eating of
meat
. Due to
this
, factories producing
meat
products may stop buying more land for
meat
production
and it can be utilized for producing crops
such
as wheat, millet etc.
Thus
, a huge amount of tax can make
people
consume less
meat
. Now, discussing some problems that can arise from the
measures
mentioned in the upper segments,
first
and foremost is that, a huge number of
individuals
will not listen to the
authorities
because of their materialistic approach and
people
just want to satisfy their tongue.
Further
, numerous
individuals
will get angry
also
of the harsh decision taken by the
government
.
People
will think that politics is discriminating between vegetarian food eaters. To conclude, some
measures
that the
authorities
can take to reduce the world's
meat
consumption but the
people
must have to cooperate with the
government
to make it work.
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