Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities.

Some individuals consider that masters of their work like

teachers

and

doctors

should have more salary than other professions

such

us

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sport and

entertaiment

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entertainment

personalities. I agree with

this

opinion,because,I think

teachers

and

doctors

have various

distribution

for our society and for

young

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generation.

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,

job

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of

medicine

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workers

and pedagogs is one of the most stressful

works

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work

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.Because

,

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both of these professions require communication and learning skills.Following

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by

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they need to teach and treat a lot of

people

and give them health and education.

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,

famous

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scientist Al-Farabi is

also

a teacher,he

tought

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taught

thought

many

people

and had

significiant

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significant

distribution

for

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to

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our

world's

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develop

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.

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Summurise

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the information,

jobs

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the jobs

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of

teachers

and

doctors

are

more heavy

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than others,they suffer from stress and fight

with

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the death,while

sportman

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sportsman

playing

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a game and have

a

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fun.

Secondly

,

teachers

and

doctors

have higher

distribution

for

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in

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our world than other professions.

For example

,medicine

workers

help to survive to more than

million

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people

every day,among these

people

can be

sport

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sports

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and

entertaiment

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entertainment

workers

even one of their

friend

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.Despite

to

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all of these

doctors

carry out the operation which they need to do and give

the

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life

for

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various

people

. In conclusion,I desire that

medicine

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workers

and pedagogs need to be paid more than

sport

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sports

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and

entertaiment

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entertainment

personalities,because,they have higher

distribution

for our society and world.