With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?
Nowdays
, Correct the word
Nowadays
population
has Add an article
the population
increasing
so, Replace the word
increased
land
Correct article usage
the land
of
housing Change preposition
apply
decline
. Add a missing verb
has decline
As a result
, people
construct their houses by
deforestation. It creates various Change preposition
through
of
problems. I explain Change preposition
apply
benefits
of Correct article usage
the benefits
naturs
and what Correct your spelling
nature
natures
people
do to decreased
Wrong verb form
decrease
environment
issues.
Replace the word
environmental
To begin
with, these days people
move to urban areas therfore
, Correct your spelling
therefore
city
side population has increased and facelities
of Correct your spelling
facilities
accomadation
would Correct your spelling
accommodation
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
decline
. Metropolitan being to Correct your spelling
declined
concreate
jungle. Correct your spelling
concrete
In these
urban Change preposition
These
center
destroy natural beauty Change the spelling
centre
as
Correct quantifier usage
such as
forest
, Fix the agreement mistake
forests
park
and natural places to Fix the agreement mistake
parks
making
highrise Wrong verb form
make
building
. Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
For example
, in India, the metro city
mumbai
know as Change the capitalization
Mumbai
'dream
Correct article usage
the 'dream
city
' because,
there are many large Remove the comma
apply
industry
and business Fix the agreement mistake
industries
are
in Unnecessary verb
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
mumbai
Change the capitalization
Mumbai
city
. Every day, 30% of people
moving
Wrong verb form
move
in
the Change preposition
to
city
and settle there. Total
Correct article usage
A total
15
% of Change preposition
of 15
population
lives in Add an article
the population
mumbai
. In the past years, Change the capitalization
Mumbai
lack
of land Correct article usage
a lack
was create
. So, Change the verb form
was created
Maharashtra
Correct article usage
the Maharashtra
government
should build skyscrapersby
removing natural places. Correct your spelling
skyscrapers
skyscrapers by
Hence
, tourist
attraction Add an article
the tourist
was decrease
, it directly Change the verb form
was decreased
was decreasing
effect
on Change the verb form
effects
government
income. The natural
sources are Correct article usage
Natural
extremly
important to decline Correct your spelling
extremely
globle
warming issues. These are only Correct your spelling
global
one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
creatures
it Change to a singular noun
creature
absorb
carbon dioxide and Change the verb form
absorbs
exude
Change the verb form
exudes
oxgyenin
Correct your spelling
oxygen
oxygen in
Correct article usage
the enviroment
enviroment
.
There are various solutions Correct your spelling
environment
of
save to nature. Change preposition
apply
Firstly
, people
adopt green
building concept because it Correct article usage
the green
protect
to Change the verb form
protects
environment
and Add an article
the environment
fulfill
the need of human beings. Change the spelling
fulfil
Secondly
, the government
should makes
laws of Wrong verb form
make
proctect
to nature and decreased Correct your spelling
protect
environment
issues. Replace the word
environmental
Thirdly
, people
who deforstation
to build housing area. The Correct your spelling
deforestation
government
should take legal action against those people
.
In conclusion, the
nature is god's gifted so, Correct article usage
apply
everyone
Correct word choice
so everyone
Add a missing verb
has responsibilities
responsibilities
to protect and take care of there. That protect with Fix the agreement mistake
responsibility
endangred
situation Correct your spelling
endangered
such
as global warming, pollution and other more.Submitted by jeetkacha13 on
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