Governments should focus their spending on public services rather than on the arts (eg. music and painting). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often preferred that

governmental

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government

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funding should be allocated to public

facilities

instead

of spending the money just on the services related to arts. I am, firmly, in favour of

this

statement and provide a few reasons in the following essay.

To begin

with, when it comes to deciding where to spend the state funds, sports

facilities

and services should be considered

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a top priority. Providing that schools and sports centres are

well- equipped

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with modern and comfortable

facilities

, the young people get inspired to do a sport and lead a healthy lifestyle.

Thus

, these initiatives not only make them fit and healthy

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but

also

enable their countries to be

one

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of the renowned ones in the world, winning top-ranked tournaments. Take,

for example

, the Argentinian football team, who have recently won the World Cup, which is a clear sign of allotting a significant amount of money to

sport

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.

As a result

, the young generation may be motivated to start a sport and make the country world-famous.

Besides

, another sector that local authorities ought to pay attention

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road

infrastructure. Since it is a fundamental need of us to commute to work or

another destinations

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on a daily basis, roads have to be repaired adequately.

In other words

, we, as ordinary people, regularly witness several

road

accidents or car crashes either in person or on social media,

that is

why politicians should improve the quality of motorways with the addition of lighting during the night as well as visible

road

signs rather than wasting the budget on unnecessary services. In conclusion, governments ought to take sports

facilities

and

maintenance

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of roads into consideration in place of spending

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public funding on the arts.

This

is because they can popularise the national identity of that country, and, more importantly, prevent death numbers together with accidents on the

road

.