Some people say that individuals should change jobs during their working life often while others believe that doing the same job has advantages to individuals, companies, and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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the same
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advantageous
andsociety
.
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and society
society
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with,I will talk about people believe
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who believe
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are best
to
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for
them
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their
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in life
life
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live
first
paragraph and will talk about doing Correct article usage
the same
same
work have advantages more for their Correct your spelling
some
life
after.
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believes
job
are
better because their think experience in Change the verb form
is
life
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valued
thanothers
thing and Correct your spelling
than others
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sometimes
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adventure more than doing their expert skill. Change the article
an
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the experience
creative
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creativity
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for
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an expert
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expect
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which
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enough
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confidence
have
power.
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apply
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doing Change the verb form
thinks
same
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the same
job
have advantages more for their life
,may be
their peoples believe Correct your spelling
maybe
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human can only focus in
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on
one
thing. For instance
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they're
they are
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focused
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on
one
thing will be do
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do
more
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apply
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things
in
the same time.
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at
have
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has
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their own
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way
life
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is
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their own
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what
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and what
want
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wants
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apply
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changing
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my
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a
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