In many countries, people increasingly talk about money ( How much they earn or how much they paid for things in their daily conservations. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative development

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day and age, there is no denying that we are living in
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economic growth period. There are many fluctuations
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s and many
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believe that they tend to talk more about
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. From my point of view, I think it brings both a positive and negative development It is universally accepted that
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plays a substantial role in our lives and we can’t live without it.
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is a measure that will judge the value of one person. There is a fact that
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who earn a lot of
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can achieve
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.
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with wealth and stories always stand
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high positions in society.
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, when someone talks about the
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in their conservations as how much they earn or how much they paid for things,… it means that they are flexing and having sustainable confidence in their income.
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, when they have
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-related conservations with other
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, they can
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learn more about their finances or useful lessons related to
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.
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, when they engage in knowledge exchanges related to
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matters, they will have motivated to develop
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a higher level of income.
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have some negative consequences related to
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statement. To the best of my knowledge, there still have many
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who actually don’t interest in talking about
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. They want to keep it secret for them, everyone has their privacy and. of course they won't tell anyone about it. Particularly
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who always flex about their income will make those around them feel uncomfortable and have a bad impression in these boasts and brag
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. To sum up, these problems have pros and cons. Talking about
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in daily conservations is very necessary for today’s economic development but
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should mention it
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moderately.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial literacy
  • transparency
  • social media influence
  • wealth
  • spending habits
  • cost of living
  • consumer society
  • material wealth
  • social status
  • personal finance
  • stress
  • financial standing
  • jealousy
  • competitiveness
  • personal relationships
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