Some people say that too much attention and many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

some arguments are held about whether

wildlife

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receive

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a great deal of surveillance and a large number of facilities to be preserved or not. I side with those people who think too much attention and many resources are given

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wildlife

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protection since some strict measures are taken in

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regard which

i

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discuss in

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as

follow

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are allocated by

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in order to preserve

animals

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and

birds

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.

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, some rules are made to avoid

wildlife

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from haunting or many scientists are in charge to find some solutions to tackle with

extinction

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of

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and

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.

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, many of them have already been killed or

dead

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due to human activities for their meat and skin, a myriad of them are protected through adopting reasonable policy by

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.

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, advocates of

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and

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have been trying to produce content about

protection

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the protection

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of

wildlife

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through publishing virtually some videos on the internet or holding courses in schools or universities in order to encourage people to be careful about

wildlife

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and make them

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cognizant of all ways and means that

threat

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them.

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one of my

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have become vegetarian when he

had

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watched a movie in which many

animals

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got slaughtered by humans. Overall, some people claim that too much care and facilities are given

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the protection

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protection

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of

animals

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and

birds

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. I agree with

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such

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notion as

policy

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a policy

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maker

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or government take some actions

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as making rules, responsible scientists, and advertising in

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regard