A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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A large group of
people
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stands against the exploitation faced by
animals
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and
advocate
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advocates
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for their
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.
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, a section believes
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animals
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for their personal benefits
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as
food
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and benefits of society
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as research. For a long time
animals
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are being used
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a recreational activities
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a recreational activity
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in zoos and circuses. A group of
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feels
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is curtailment in
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the freedom
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rights
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of
animals
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Also
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they have been used as
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a beast
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beast
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beasts
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of burden, with a lot of work taken out of them and returning nothing in return. These
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also
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argue that rather than providing them
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they are killed for
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, for leather
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of our cosmetics Ex and for
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. They are
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made
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subject of experiments in the name of research. Another section of
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thinks that
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humans can make use of
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for
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advantage. They think
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an animal
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animal
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animals
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should be used for
food
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, as they provide an essential nutrient in form of proteins which cannot be found in plants. Somehow economy is
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dependent on the
animals
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as
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food
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the food
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business, leather business and medicinal development research Which is dependent on
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the use
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of
animals
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. There are a lot of places in the world where modern technology and roads haven't arrived yet.
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are used
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for farming
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lands that
people
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depend on for
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food
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and for the transport process. Harsh cards and block cards are used for
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purposes. In my opinion, if
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are stopped
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from being
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used and given equal
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,
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will create
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chaos in the world. The growth of
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will be unchecked.
People
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won't be able to step out of their homes
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fear of getting attacked
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by
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animals
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. There will be no new medicines or the humans will have to be volunteering for
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the testing
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of new medicines. There will be a strong deficiency of protein
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a
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human
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it will disturb everything. So according to me, we need to use
animals
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for these positive purposes. I believe
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You should be a balanced 1. If we keep using them in large numbers and leaving a very small number of them,
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will disturb the
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chain and
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affect
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nature. So some things should be used in a balanced manner in nature in order to sustain the balance of life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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