A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion
A large group of
people
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and advocate
for their Fix the agreement mistake
advocates
rights
. On the other hand
, a section believes using
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in using
the
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animals
for their personal benefits such
as food
and benefits of society such
as research.
For a long time animals
are being used as
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for
a recreational activities
in zoos and circuses. A group of Correct the article-noun agreement
a recreational activity
recreational activities
people
feels this
is curtailment in freedom
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the freedom
rights
of animals
. Also
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a beast
beast
of burden, with a lot of work taken out of them and returning nothing in return. These Fix the agreement mistake
beasts
people
also
argue that rather than providing them rights
they are killed for food
, for leather come
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. They are Correct your spelling
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also
made a
subject of experiments in the name of research. Another section of Correct article usage
the
people
thinks that the
humans can make use of Correct article usage
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animals
for
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to
the
advantage. They think Change the word
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an animal
animal
should be used for Fix the agreement mistake
animals
food
, as they provide an essential nutrient in form of proteins which cannot be found in plants. Somehow economy is also
dependent on the animals
as
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in
food
business, leather business and medicinal development research Which is dependent on Correct article usage
the food
use
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the use
animals
. There are a lot of places in the world where modern technology and roads haven't arrived yet. Animals
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people
depend on for the
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food
and for the transport process. Harsh cards and block cards are used for such
purposes.
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are stopped being
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from being
rights
, this
will create a
chaos in the world. The growth of Correct article usage
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animals
will be unchecked. People
won't be able to step out of their homes in
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for
from
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by
animals
. There will be no new medicines or the humans will have to be volunteering for testing
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animals
for these positive purposes. I believe this
You should be a balanced 1. If we keep using them in large numbers and leaving a very small number of them, this
will disturb the food
chain and consequently
affect the
nature.
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