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Some people think that the museum should be enjoyable places to entertain people while others believe that that purpose of a museum is to educate. Discuss both views and opinion.

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Compared with the past, the number of visitors is increasing all over the world. Each country has a sightsee which shows their culture and history.
Museums
 are one of the sights. Some people believe that a museum should become a place an entertainment
that is
 enjoyable for the population.
However
, others think the aim of a museum is to educate. Basically, I support the
second
 view for one major reason.
First
 of all, the basis of creating
museums
 is to learn. Whether you be a student or a visitor,
museums
 are the best way to know about the arts, history, and culture which those are you've studied or
you
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want to see in the country that you've
traveled
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.
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on the other hand
, some of the crowd believe that
museums
 are a kind of entertainment to make people enjoy where they are. In conclusion,
museums
 are the best and simplest way to learn history.
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