You lost an item while travelling on a bus. An employee of the bus company assisted you in recovering your lost item. Write a letter to the company manager to thank the employees In your letter: - Describe what you lost and how the employee helped you to find it. - Say how you felt after recovering it - Explain why it is important to you

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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