More and more people are relying on their private cars as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over reliance on cars can cause and suggest at least one solution. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Private

cars

would be the most convenient way to

transport

if we talked about middle-class people or beyond. There are so many causes that will happen

such

as the use of natural fuel which can affect global climate change. In

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I am going to describe transportation in my country.

To begin

with, Public transportation in Thailand has not been developing for 60 years. People in Thailand still use an old bus from 6 decades ago. Some of those population service a BTS

that is

highly cost starting at 26 baht for 1 station.

Hence

, a person who can afford a car chooses to travel by

their

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private car

instead

of public

transport

because of its convenience.

Moreover

, In the middle-class group of society when they graduated. Most of their expense is spent

with

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luxury stuff

such

as watches, bags, clothes, and

cars

.

Therefore

the amount of

cars

is increasing every year, so it can be affected

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the environment. Not only pollution is raising but

also

PM 2.5 which can cause lung disease and many other symptoms. To conclude, people should have a responsibility to maintain their community by

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using their private

cars

and turning into use

a public

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public transport

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transport

instead

. To solve all the problems in the

first

place,

Thailand

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government should be developing public

transport

that is

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affordable price , easy to access and a brand-new bus so everyone doesn't have to suffer from bad pollution.