Some people get into debt by buying things they don`t need and can`t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
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modern
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the modern
also
they have enough money
to buy resulting them
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in them
to pay
debts . In Change the verb form
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this
essay, the possible causes and solutions to this
problem will be provided.
To begin
with , there are two principal reasons for this
common issue. Firstly
, The vast majority of population
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the population
are
not able to manage their disposable income properly. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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other words , they have not been developing Change preposition
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money
management skills as consumerism patterns . It is undeniable that,
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land
bills , Correct word choice
and land
purchase
groceries and Correct word choice
and purchase
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of clothing. Add an article
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not
because they do not have apparel to wear but in order to satisfy their needs. Add a missing verb
is not
Consequently
, they make an impulsive purchases
at Correct the article-noun agreement
impulsive purchases
an impulsive purchase
clothe
stores and even buy most of them Change the verb form
clothing
for
debt . Change preposition
in
Secondly
, tantalizing advertisement
of different shopping stores and products. Commercial breaks are not only ubiquitous on Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
the
Tv but Correct article usage
apply
also
social
media networks and streets. Especially in developed countries, where consumerism reached a peak , the bustling streets were filled with blankets urging Change preposition
on social
people
to make an impulsive purchases
and Correct the article-noun agreement
impulsive purchases
an impulsive purchase
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money
from their relativities.
To tackle this
pressing matters , Correct determiner usage
these
people
should have
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apply
attend
courses which can help to address their financial problems and improve Change the verb form
attended
money
management skills. In recent years, people
can sign up these
courses online . Change preposition
for these
Additionally
, reducing tempting advertisements of various products especially
women's favourite cosmetics or Add the comma(s)
,especially
clothe
brands could decline the rise of Change the form of the verb
clothing
this
issue for a while . Instead
media can rise awareness among Add a comma
,Instead
middle
class to invest their Correct article usage
the middle
money
wisely and boost amount
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the amount
money
they gain every month.
In conclusion, nevertheless
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,nevertheless
people
have developed bad shopping habits leading to economic instability , they can solve this
problem by developing money
management skills and not representing commercial
in public places could Fix the agreement mistake
commercials
also
reduce the negative effect of this
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