The internet has made knowledge immediately available through computers and smartphones all over the world. Much of the information is free. Discuss the both advantages and drawbacks of this trend.

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Nowadays internet has made drastic changes around the world who want to learn and know new

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availability

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mostly free of cost .

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, we have some disadvantages to accessing digital gadgets, which let we discuss in the essay.

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, digital platforms are used to access information and

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knowledge. Especially it is helpful for youngsters to grow their knowledge and easy to show off their talents to others. most people use Twitter, Instagram and Facebook

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explore

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their talents and get

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.most of the books

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on the web without

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cost .it is useful to those who can not afford

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the cost and who is ready to learn new

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, The web contains a lot of information it is useful for good

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and same as it is used to know bad

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digital gadgets for playing games that time show off a lot of advertisements in the middle. unknowingly they

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and move on to the other websites .some websites are contained adult images, which are affected, children's minds.

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week we made the payment for one exam

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online at that time some advertisements blink to fill in our details. After

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we received a mail from someone we are requested to buy some webpages and need to pay money . In the conclusion, The internet will help to discover knowledge and learn new

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at the same time need to be aware of malpractice on the web .

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The internet has made knowledge immediately available through computers and smartphones all over the world. Much of the information is free. Discuss the both advantages and drawbacks of this trend.

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The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012.

Some people feel that public money should not be spent on cultural amenities such as museums, theatres and art festivals. How important do you think these things are to society as a whole? Are there any areas which are more important for the governments to fund?

Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?