In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

There is no doubt that having some

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time

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during studying reenergizes the brain to continue working efficiently.

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,

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in some countries are under extreme

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to

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hard and

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, they have minimal

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time

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. The possible reasons for

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trend as well as suggested solutions will be discussed in

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. One possible reason for

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to face a lot of

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to work hard on their education with no

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off would be the high cost of education.

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, expensive courses put a financial burden on families and

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which forces the

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to try hard to complete these courses successfully and quickly.

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, these

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ignore the need for some spare

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and focus on their

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work. Another possible reason would be the

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of

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materials which is becoming extensive for a short semester.

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,

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pressure

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leaves no choice for

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except to

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as hard as possible to be able to finish

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material on

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.

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, it is obvious that these

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have no

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left to have some

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activities.

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, some solutions could be suggested to help solve

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problem. One possible solution would be reducing the cost of educational courses in these countries

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government

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. By doing

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, both the

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and their families would have less financial

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and

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the

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could be less stressed during their studies which might enable them to have some free

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. Another solution would be

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groups, if

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study

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in groups,

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each one of the group members could summarize part of the curriculum and shares it with the rest of the group.

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would save a lot of

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for all of the

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in the group and

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the amount of

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would be reduced. These suggestions could help the

students

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to have some

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time

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which is important for them to stay focused. In conclusion, there are many reasons that put the

students

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in some countries under stress and

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to

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hard and leave them no

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for

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activities,

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, the

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solutions could tackle

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problem and allow the

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to have some

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free

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which is essential for them to recharge their energy.