In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

There is no doubt that having some

leisure

time

during studying reenergizes the brain to continue working efficiently.

However

,

students

in some countries are under extreme

pressure

to

study

hard and

therefore

, they have minimal

leisure

time

. The possible reasons for

this

trend as well as suggested solutions will be discussed in

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. One possible reason for

students

to face a lot of

pressure

to work hard on their education with no

time

off would be the high cost of education.

For instance

, expensive courses put a financial burden on families and

students

which forces the

students

to try hard to complete these courses successfully and quickly.

As a result

, these

students

ignore the need for some spare

time

and focus on their

study

work. Another possible reason would be the

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of

study

materials which is becoming extensive for a short semester.

Consequently

,

this

pressure

leaves no choice for

students

except to

study

as hard as possible to be able to finish

this

material on

time

.

Thus

, it is obvious that these

students

have no

time

left to have some

leisure

activities.

However

, some solutions could be suggested to help solve

this

problem. One possible solution would be reducing the cost of educational courses in these countries

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government

fundings

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. By doing

this

, both the

students

and their families would have less financial

pressure

and

therefore

the

students

could be less stressed during their studies which might enable them to have some free

time

. Another solution would be

study

groups, if

students

study

in groups,

then

each one of the group members could summarize part of the curriculum and shares it with the rest of the group.

This

would save a lot of

time

for all of the

students

in the group and

as a

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the amount of

pressure

would be reduced. These suggestions could help the

students

to have some

leisure

time

which is important for them to stay focused. In conclusion, there are many reasons that put the

students

in some countries under stress and

pressure

to

study

hard and leave them no

time

for

leisure

activities,

however

, the

above suggested

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solutions could tackle

this

problem and allow the

students

to have some

study

free

time

which is essential for them to recharge their energy.