You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter ? say which points in the article you agree with ? explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres ? offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir, Madame, My name is Paul Harris. I am a big fan of your journal and I live in Douala. I am writing to claims concerning an

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that I read in your journal yesterday. The related

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was published on the 1st of September 2021 by your journalist Harry KOA. In

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he pretends that Douala's

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centre is similar to those

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centres around the entire region.

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statement is true for many aspects like the water network, the presence of high buildings and the quality of roads.

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, there are many aspects in which our

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centre is different from others. contrary to what the

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says, our

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centre is not polluted as mentioned. Our council have taken many measures in order to reduce pollution like the multiplication of parking and the increasing the quality of public transport. I kindly invite Harry KOA to come to our

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for a guided tour when he can be available. I will offer him

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stay for 2 or 3 days in the period of his choice.

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will make him appreciate the quality of life in our

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. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Paul Harris.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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