The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking in banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
some
people
believe that there should be an obligation Use synonyms
in
which the usage of cell Change preposition
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phones
is forbidden like smoking in specified Use synonyms
places
. In my opinion, it is a good idea to some extent; Use synonyms
however
, it is better to take some measures to limit Linking Words
users
in Use synonyms
this
regard since an emergency situation might arise for Linking Words
people
who work with their mobile Use synonyms
phones
.
The rule of prohibiting Use synonyms
users
of mobile Use synonyms
phones
to specified Use synonyms
places
could be effective. The hectic schedule that many Use synonyms
people
have, makes them do something at every possible opportunity. To illustrate, many Use synonyms
people
find some time to talk on the Use synonyms
phone
on public transport during their journey on a bus or the tube which makes an excessive level of noise and is deeply annoying. Use synonyms
This
problem could deter commuters from using public transport rather than private vehicles. Linking Words
Hence
, Linking Words
such
rules provide an environment in which Linking Words
people
are obliged to respect others.
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Although
banning Linking Words
users
of a cellphone is favourable to some extent, the importance of urgent needs is disregarded. Use synonyms
This
is to say that Linking Words
such
legislation, should be based on what Linking Words
users
use their Use synonyms
phones
for. As an example, when somebody tries to do something with his or her cell Use synonyms
phone
mutely, any regulation is not required; whereas for noisy activities Use synonyms
such
as talking on the Linking Words
phone
, some restriction should be imposed on the time of usage if a person broke the rule, he or she would pay fine or be banned from entering forbidden Use synonyms
places
.
To sum up, despite the advantages of prohibiting Use synonyms
people
from using a mobile Use synonyms
phone
like smoking in certain Use synonyms
places
, restrictions on type and period of usage are more beneficial.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite