The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking in banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
some
people
believe that there should be an obligation in
which the usage of cell Change preposition
apply
phones
is forbidden like smoking in specified places
. In my opinion, it is a good idea to some extent; however
, it is better to take some measures to limit users
in this
regard since an emergency situation might arise for people
who work with their mobile phones
.
The rule of prohibiting users
of mobile phones
to specified places
could be effective. The hectic schedule that many people
have, makes them do something at every possible opportunity. To illustrate, many people
find some time to talk on the phone
on public transport during their journey on a bus or the tube which makes an excessive level of noise and is deeply annoying. This
problem could deter commuters from using public transport rather than private vehicles. Hence
, such
rules provide an environment in which people
are obliged to respect others.
Although
banning users
of a cellphone is favourable to some extent, the importance of urgent needs is disregarded. This
is to say that such
legislation, should be based on what users
use their phones
for. As an example, when somebody tries to do something with his or her cell phone
mutely, any regulation is not required; whereas for noisy activities such
as talking on the phone
, some restriction should be imposed on the time of usage if a person broke the rule, he or she would pay fine or be banned from entering forbidden places
.
To sum up, despite the advantages of prohibiting people
from using a mobile phone
like smoking in certain places
, restrictions on type and period of usage are more beneficial.Submitted by TUTOO on
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