Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

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Living in large cities gets quite difficult due to
increasing
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the increasing
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number of residents, who prefer moving to the megapolis for
better
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a better
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life.
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,
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actions can lead to many hazardous
problems
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that need to be solved by the
government
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or
individuals
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by themselves. In
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essay, an attempt will be made to discuss
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issues as
pollution
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,
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and lack
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of natural
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, which have occurred
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in
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overpopulation
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the overpopulation
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of urban areas and it
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suggests various ways to solve them. Many
problems
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may result from overpopulation. One of the major
problems
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is environmental
pollution
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. The high number of vehicles contributes
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creating
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of greenhouse gas,
the
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quantity of garbage rapidly growing due to using a variety of products by a lot of people, which cannot even be recycled and
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is all have
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a huge impact on
human’s
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health. The
second
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problem is declining of natural
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. Human’s voracious consumption of the gifts of nature for manufactures, factories and as sources of power and electricity, which maintain life on the planet, can lead to
limited
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the limited
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stock of fossil fuels. These issues should be solved until it is too late. There are two ways
government
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and
individuals
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can try to cope with
problems
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attached to
overpopulation
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the overpopulation
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of big cities.
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of all, to save the world from enormous
pollution
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,
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government
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the government
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have to think about improving equipment
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recycling trash,
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eco-friendly products and ‘’green technologies’’. It can help to decrease the formation of greenhouse gas and
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apply
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pollution
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generally.
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, with the new technologies,
individuals
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could recycle garbage by themselves Another solution is switching from using
resources
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,
such
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as coal and gas to renewable energy.
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action will allow
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us to
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to save
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natural
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of natural
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resources
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and life for many years. To sum up,
overpopulation’s
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overpopulation
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problems
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are something that
need
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needs
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an effective approach, not only by the
government
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, and
also
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by
individuals
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that should work on their solutions together to make better results.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • strain on infrastructure
  • public services
  • overcrowded
  • inadequate healthcare services
  • pressure on educational institutions
  • environmental impact
  • increased pollution
  • waste management
  • destruction of green spaces
  • natural habitats
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