Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Living in large cities gets quite difficult due to
increasing
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number of residents, who prefer moving to the megapolis for
better
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a better
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life.
However
,
such
actions can lead to many hazardous
problems
that need to be solved by the
government
or
individuals
by themselves. In
this
essay, an attempt will be made to discuss
such
issues as
pollution
,
lack
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and lack
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of natural
resources
, which have occurred
as a result
in
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of
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overpopulation
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the overpopulation
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of urban areas and it
also
suggests various ways to solve them. Many
problems
may result from overpopulation. One of the major
problems
is environmental
pollution
. The high number of vehicles contributes
the
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creating
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of greenhouse gas,
the
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and the
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quantity of garbage rapidly growing due to using a variety of products by a lot of people, which cannot even be recycled and
that
is all have
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a huge impact on
human’s
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human
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health. The
second
problem is declining of natural
resources
. Human’s voracious consumption of the gifts of nature for manufactures, factories and as sources of power and electricity, which maintain life on the planet, can lead to
limited
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the limited
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stock of fossil fuels. These issues should be solved until it is too late. There are two ways
government
and
individuals
can try to cope with
problems
attached to
overpopulation
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the overpopulation
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of big cities.
First
of all, to save the world from enormous
pollution
,
government
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the government
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have to think about improving equipment
of
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recycling trash,
create
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creating
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eco-friendly products and ‘’green technologies’’. It can help to decrease the formation of greenhouse gas and
the
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apply
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pollution
generally.
In addition
, with the new technologies,
individuals
could recycle garbage by themselves Another solution is switching from using
resources
,
such
as coal and gas to renewable energy.
Such
action will allow
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us to
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to save
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saving
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natural
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of natural
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resources
and life for many years. To sum up,
overpopulation’s
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overpopulation
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problems
are something that
need
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needs
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an effective approach, not only by the
government
, and
also
by
individuals
that should work on their solutions together to make better results.
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  • strain on infrastructure
  • public services
  • overcrowded
  • inadequate healthcare services
  • pressure on educational institutions
  • environmental impact
  • increased pollution
  • waste management
  • destruction of green spaces
  • natural habitats
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