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Some students take one year off berween school and university .Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

#students #year #berween #school #university
Some
people
 agree that , in recent years, more
students
 get
year
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 off during their school time or university .Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of
this
 off
year
 has been positive or negative While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary , I personally believe that the benefits of the
off
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year
 far outweigh its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold.
First
 of all, it is an indisputable fact that taking one
year
 off
help
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students
' health. For
intance
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instance
, some
students
 need to go
medical
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institution
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 and cure themselves while they study .If
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people
 are not healthy, they cannot understand lessons and cannot do their
homeworks
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homework
, even they cannot move.Another advantage of
this
 situation is that
students
 may exchange their knowledge with foreign
students
 in other countries.
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this
way
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 many
students
 can improve their skills. It is true to say that a
year
 off is advantageous for both the
students
 and their country.
On the other hand
,
nonetheless
,there is one very convincing point the
students
 may lag behind
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their classmates who
people
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 of the same age .
Then
 they may
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not
recieve
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receive
 significant experience . The idea of being late should not
also
 be neglected , as it adds more weight in support of the argument. Another obvious disadvantage is that if
people
 take a holiday one
year
 off
then
 they will lose their interest
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 studying.
For example
, after a
year
 of
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treat
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 for an illness, they will leave their interests
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 any field. By way of my conclusion, I once again reaffirm my subjective view on
this
 contentious issue is positive. Some
students
recieve
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receive
received
 important experiences from a
year
 off.
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