Some people believe that technology has made the lives of workers easier whilst other people disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Eating healthy has been a well-discussed topic recently in our society. Many people claim that public governments should help through decreasing prizes of organic food.
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, others explain that diet it is responsibility of each person, and nobody can say that you should eat. In
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essay, I am going to give both points of view along with my personal opinion. On one hand, having a good diet is essencial for life due to
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prevent a lot of diseases:
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: is well-known that junk food causes obbesity in people that have tend to increase rapidly weight
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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