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Nowadays, a great deal of educational devices has been equipped in university. Primarily, it is believed that computers have been coming to play a crucial role in great lectures. In my opinion, having computer equipment will always have not only benefits in education but also drawbacks in studying

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increased in day-to-day
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 these techniques are playing a vital role in the life of people,
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computer's have
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 their own demerits as well. I will discuss
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To begin
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, usage of hand-handled devices has
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drastically
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Firstly
 with the help of electronic-devices work can be done accurately and in
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 these devices
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repetitive jobs, as we need in traditional schooling methods. I have observed that in the past, we used to learn mathematical tables by reciting them again and again,
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 now
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 and learn important points simultaneously.
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, Technology has converted us in
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, Kids are not using these hand-handled devices for their studies whereas they are using these for their enjoyment only.
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Platforms
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 becomes a major concern due to the
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 security, because it is not possible for the parents to keep an eye on the kids
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. According to the survey published in the
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 more than
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 of the students are watching movies almost half of their day time which adversely
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 the eye-sight of the adoselent.
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 power to achieve any height but again
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 we should take into account the balance required for using these for
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