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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills, but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#parents #opportunities #children #people #schools #skills #range #subjects #future
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 you cannot find any person who wants a dark fate for his children. Because of the difference of society members, they have
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 diversity is in education that everybody believe
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 fate. A
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 think the best thing for training in
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 is
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 have better Point due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. I think the
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many or some years ago. I did not know your opinion but in my personal
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skills
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 more important. By the way of example, my cousin even not knowing his heart where
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his body but from
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 that he learned, he can earn excellent money. To analyze
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 many subjects, can be distractive for
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 and can make them
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 depressed because they cannot handle
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 load. If you want to see the evidence, I have a sample in my family and you can see her. She went to the private school because of the
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 of her father and the heaviness of lessons and the pressure of home
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regret for her father. I choose
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 that you hate them. some wise told something wiser, never compare a monkey and a fish in climbing a tree if you do
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 check every
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, like your
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 IQ and interests. Any
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this
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skills
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