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Many People these days work in other countries and they take their families with them to live. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages.

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 number of individuals who prefer to work and stay in foreign countries accompanying
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their families. Personally, I believe that the benefits of
this
 trend surpass its drawbacks.
To begin
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family
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 to a foreign country, opens up many opportunities
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 the person, who takes his or her family overseas with them.
Firstly
, that person can live stress-free with the family members, He can avoid the stress and trauma of living away from
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, father, wife and kids.
This
 can boost one’s efficiency and overall,
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healthy well-being.
Secondly
, living abroad would give the opportunity to children to study in a developed country with
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 education system. Having
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 from a
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 institute is an achievement in itself for many families.
On the other hand
, no doubt there are some disadvantages too, of taking family overseas. One to mention here is the language barrier. Language is
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effective communication. Lack of good command
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native
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 language not only prevent to convey
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 message
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 but
also
 lowered
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confidence among individuals.
Moreover
, good command of dialects provides more employment opportunities and
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 good for the settlement in a new nation. To conclude, according to my opinion, we should consider more the advantages over
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 disadvantages
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 taking families overseas.
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