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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of house hold energy in many countries around the world. Why is this What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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There are many types of
energy
power
 produce sources available all over the world
such
 as
,
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 fuel, windmills, water
power
, charcoal
power
 and nuclear
power
.
However
, among those solar
power
 is used as a
power
source
 the people globally. Because the initial cost for install the solar panel is expensive, there is no other payment that should make per month. Another point that can support
this
 is other
power
 suppliers are not freely available, sun rays come to the earth free of charge.
Therefore
, using solar
power
 as a
source
 of
energy
 has pons and cons as well. When compared with other methods
this
 method has many advantages.
This
 is a cost-effective method.
Moreover
, it is an eco-friendly
energy
source
. Without doing any harm to the environment public aid to get
energy
 from the sun easily.
Additionally
 to that, individuals do not face any experience with
power
 cuts as the
power
 station is located at their residencies. The people who are living in countries which are close to the equator get sunrays all over the year easily.
Hence
 consumers prefer to use the above
energy
source
 for their
day to day
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 activities. The
energy
 gets from the daytime should store for the user at night.
This
 is one of the disadvantages users are facing. In spite of that, rainy days cannot produce
power
 due to receiving enough
energy
 from the sun. In
such
 a situation to avoid difficulties that can occur another
power
source
 should include.
Finally
, I would like to conclude that, considering the benefits which can be required from solar
power
 , the disadvantages can be negotiated.
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