The maps below show the development of a small fishing village and its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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THESE DIAGRAMS SHOW THE NOTICEABLE DEVELOPMENT OF A SMALL FISHING VILLAGE. IT IS CLEAR FROM THW
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BETWEEN THA PLANS THE A ENORMOUS CONSTRUCTION BILDINGS TO BE Appropriate FOR TOURIST.
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COMPARATIVE
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WHAT IS SHOWN, WE CAN SEE A GROUP OF HOTELS NEAR THE BEACH. FURTHERMORE
,THEY ESTABLISH NEW RODS TO suits THE BIG TRAFFIC IN VILLAGE SPECIALLY IN visitor SESSION.THEN
, IT REPLACED SOME LOCATIONS ,FOR INSTANCE
, THE GOLF COURSE IN THE PAST WAS THE WOODLAND AND LIKEWISE
, OLIVES CHANGE TO FRUIT AND VEG TO SUPPLY THE MARKET FOR HOTEL TOURISTS.MOREOVER
,THE WHOLE HARBOUR AND BOOTS WERE REMOVED AND DEVELOPED INTO A BIG BEATCH TO ACCOMED THE TOURIST.
WHILE
THE ORIGINAL VILLAGE WAS COSTLY IT STILL WITH A SOME NEW HOUSES FOR LOCALS.
TO SUM UP
,WE COULD SAY THAT INSTEAD
OF THE IMMENSITY CHANGES IN 3 DECADES THE POPULATION FROM 12000 JUMPING TO 80000Submitted by jjooojjooo2020 on
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