More and More wild animals are on the verge of annihilation and others are on the rare list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve the problem.
Due to globalisation and industrialisation,
large
number of Change the article
a large
the large
animals
are disappearing from the globe. Human's
unjustified needs are the main reasons for Change noun form
Human
this
and for solving this
major issue, Government should take strict actions
against the wrongdoers.
To start with, People started deforestation in the need of more and more space and started constructing big and fancy buildings without considering Fix the agreement mistake
action
needs
of Correct article usage
the needs
wild-life
, Correct your spelling
wildlife
moreover
use of plastic material harms the ecosystem in great
way. Change the article
a great
Firstly
plastic type
cheap bags sustain in the environment for 100 Add a hyphen
plastic-type
of
years and affects the balance of nature. Change preposition
apply
Secondly
for our own amusement, people are using Add a comma
,Secondly
animals
like articles as they are not having life
. Add an article
a life
For example
, I have seen multiple people in the Zoo throwing stones on
the monkeys for their Change preposition
at
short term
happiness without thinking about the pain, they are giving to the innocents.
Add a hyphen
short-term
On the other hand
, Government should implant strict rules for the community to use of
plastic and other Change preposition
apply
hazardious
material and should impose proper penalties for Correct your spelling
hazardous
Add an article
the safeguard
safeguard
Wrong verb form
safeguarding
of
wild Change preposition
apply
animals
. Secondly
, Rule Makers should also
take into account the concern of annihilation of rare species by procuring them from other part
of Change the wording
another part
other parts
nation
, Add an article
the nation
a nation
furthermore
strict Add a comma
,furthermore
guideliness
should be made for hunting. For Correct your spelling
guidelines
Instances
, The Prime Minister of IndiaFix the agreement mistake
Instance
,
has recently imported Remove the comma
apply
for
four Change preposition
apply
tiger
and created a safe house for them in West Bengal even he Change to a plural noun
tigers
also
issued guidelines for the list of rare habitats and prosecution in the event of hunting these creatures.
In nutshell, Society at a large should take resonsibility
for taking care of natural Correct your spelling
responsibility
inhabitats
, Correct your spelling
inhabitants
habitats
moreover
law-makers and humans both jointly shake hands to preserve and take care of wild Add a comma
,moreover
animals
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