Governments suits paid money on railways whether than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Many people nowadays see governments

buliding

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building

railways

for the citizens around their cities and

paid

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paying

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less

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fewer

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attentions

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attention

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on

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to

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roads

,

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apply

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if compared

railways

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to railways

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and

roads

eveyone

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everyone

in the city can see that

railways

clearly are worth

than

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more than

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roads

significantly.

To begin

with,in my

opinion

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,opinion

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I agree with governments to

bulid

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build

more

railways

because

on

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,on

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one hand, there can make facilities

to

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for

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people who

lives

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live

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in town.

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,

railways

can reduce the distance in the city and can due to people around here

have

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having

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more

relationship

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relationships

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but

on the other hand

,

bulid

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build

railways

are

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apply

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used much

of

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apply

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money and used much

of

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apply

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force to

constructed

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construct

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if

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apply

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compared with

bulid

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build

roads

.

However

,I think in the long

terms

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term

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that will

good

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be good

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for citizens in the city.

Next

,I will talk about

roads

even though I said

railways

are better than

roads

but I

did'

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didn't

did

t

say to

use

all time and cash on

railways

because

railways

are one of

solutions

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the solutions

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to help citizens in town but not all of

solutions

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the solutions

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anythings have profits and drawbacks so in my opinion don'

t

use

one thing to solve all problem.

For instance

,

sometime

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sometimes

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roads

are useful and can transfer things

in

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to

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individual

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individuals

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easier than

railways

because

railways

are

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are used

are using

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use

time

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the time

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to construct and specific so there can'

t

use

in

sometime

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some time

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but

roads

can do it. In conclusion,I strongly agree with

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the government

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government

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government's

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paid

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paying

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money

to

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on

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building

railways

but I suggest to

bulid

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build

more

roads

too because

that

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those

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two things

are have

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have

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own

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their own

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profits and

own

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their own

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drawbacks government can pay attention to

railways

but don'

t

forgot

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forget

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roads

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the roads

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.