Your company has sent you on a three-month course in another country. The course is coming to an end, but you would like to prolong your stay. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -describe how the course benefited you -explain why you would like to delay your return -suggest a date when you would like to come back.

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Frank,

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and foremost, thank you for the great opportunity that you have given me and for recommending me for

such

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an incredible

course

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on “ Masters in Accounting standards” in Dublin.

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, the learnings from the

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are unmatchable as it enabled me to update my understanding and knowledge of accounting standards with the latest amendments.

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, they taught us the practical implications in the business scenarios which is going to be extremely beneficial while servicing our company’s clientage. Since

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program is going to wind up in a week. I would like to request to extend my stay by two weeks since the organizers are offering a complementary quick

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on effective communication for serving customers, which, I believe, would be really helpful for our company.

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, I should be able to join back at work by end of

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month right after the completion of

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quick

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. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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162 words

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