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Your company has sent you on a three-month course in another country. The course is coming to an end, but you would like to prolong your stay. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -describe how the course benefited you -explain why you would like to delay your return -suggest a date when you would like to come back.

#company #course #country #manager #-describe #-explain #delay #-suggest #date
Dear
Mr.
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Mr
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 Frank,
First
 and foremost, thank you for the great opportunity that you have given me and for recommending me for
such
 an incredible
course
 on “ Masters in Accounting standards” in Dublin.
Firstly
, the learnings from the
course
 are unmatchable as it enabled me to update my understanding and knowledge of accounting standards with the latest amendments.
Secondly
, they taught us the practical implications in the business scenarios which is going to be extremely beneficial while servicing our company’s clientage. Since
this
 program is going to wind up in a week. I would like to request to extend my stay by two weeks since the organizers are offering a complementary quick
course
 on effective communication for serving customers, which, I believe, would be really helpful for our company.
Lastly
, I should be able to join back at work by end of
this
 month right after the completion of
this
 quick
course
. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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