Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

today, high-level
sugar
content in many sources of
food
especially in manufactured
food
.And of course ,eating so much
sugar
is not good for our health. It can cause just a simple cavy,
for example
, but
also
worse problems like the increasing level of
sugar
in the blood . Some
people
suggested that
sugar
products should be more expensive,so
people
would buy Fewer of them According to my, I think that solution is not the best one sugary products include some type of
food
that we eat every day,
such
as bread or pasta
this
food
, particularly the
first
one, is really important in our diet. so making them more expensive will influence not only our lifestyle but
also
some
people
would not be able anymore to buy the most important
food
for them just think
for example
, to poor
people
who can maybe afford a few loads of bread per day. What would they eat ,if we increase the bread price? I think that the best solution to
this
problem would be informing
people
about what they eat because sometimes we don't even know that,they have already done something to inform
people
about the characteristics of
food
, of course, and one of the most important thing as they tell you all the ingredients of a particular
food
, yet, not many
people
spend some of their time reading levels, or if they do it they probably don't know the biggest part of the substance named in the list as well not everybody knows that there is a specific order of the ingredients in the list,so something we could not do is organizing some talks inform
people
not only about the function of labels but I especially about the big amount of
sugar
we eat every day I think as well that
this
stock talk should we order organized
also
in schools because I was a child must be aware of what they eat.
Besides
, children can tell what they have learned through these conferences with their parents , so the whole family would eat better.  Put some of it I think that it is not necessary to increase the prices of
sugar
for sugary
food
and that all we need is information, that will lead
people
to eat less sugary
food
and, consequences, live better with fewer problems.
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