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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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nowadays in some countries, people taught their children that hard
work
 can achieve their dreams. in
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 I am going to discuss the negative and positive sides of the matter. ,
Also
 give my own opinion.
to begin
 ,with
although
 it is good to teach our kids to
work
 hard in
this
 life, it is
also
 like many things have bad sides for sure. I think if they one day
work
 hard and did not achieve anything it will give them disappointment and
also
 delusion. we have to tell them if it does not happen what they want even with hard
work
 it is okay. some times it works and other times it won't. I agree with telling our kids to job hard because it learn them to not give up easily. telling them that nothing is impossible in life if they
work
 hard enough. Step by step everything can happen. they just have to
work
 and keep learn
also
 read between the lines. Sometimes
this
 is very helpful for our brain if you keep telling yourself that you can do it or you can succeed you definitely will at some point. to sum up, we have to teach our children how life works and what they should do to pass a lot of situations and
also
 that they have to keep trying. and in the
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end if they have done all of
this
 stuff but still did not achieve their goals, they will be happy even though because they try their best and get experience.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • achieve
  • try hard
  • positive mindset
  • self-belief
  • motivates
  • ambitious goals
  • resilience
  • determination
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
  • growth mindset
  • unrealistic expectations
  • disappointment
  • failure
  • effort
  • hard work
  • seek support
  • individual differences
  • abilities
  • capabilities
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