More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

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These days, many migrants have a lot of difficulties living in
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countries they move to.
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, if governments helped them to integrate with
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community they could lead a better life . Nowadays, many people leave their poor countries and go in search of their luck in developed lands because they want a higher life quality .
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, as soon as they arrive there, they might not find a good job and comfortable accommodation especially when they do not own parents and friends who could help them in
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cities they are in .
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trouble communicating with doctors or nurses every time they need to vaccinate their children or access
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public hospitals for another health-related problem.
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, If both charity associations understood the true needs of all people who go away from the country where they were born
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if politicians allowed those who do not have enough money for their living to obtain a good job and a nice home, migrants should not stay along the streets asking for few coins to local communities.
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, if public hospitals took on linguistic mediators , these types of employees could provide assistance to any migrant in case he or she has health-related problems. I personally think that governments really wanted to solve all
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migrants run into, these people would be happy to be in a new land.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Metropolis
  • Rapid urban growth
  • Megacity
  • Urban sprawl
  • Housing affordability
  • Infrastructure development
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Pollution
  • Noise pollution
  • Green spaces
  • Job market
  • Social cohesion
  • Community engagement
  • Safety measures
  • Crime prevention
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