A letter to a landlord requesting permission to make changes to your rented home

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Dear Mr Joy I hope

this

letter finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to seek your permission for making an entrance to the

garden

from the living room of my

home

. As you know , I am sharing the

garden

with my neighbour as both

home

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are owned by you. ,

Currently

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we have a common entrance to the

garden

and it is through the back side of my

neighbor's

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home

. Whenever I want to use the

garden

, I have to pass through my

neighbor's

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home

. I feel that it is

unappropriate

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and it’s been bleaching their privacy. We would like to have a private entrance from my living hall. it will be more convenient for both of us. Approximately one meter of the wall might be removed to make the door. I will let you know the exact requirements after talking with the engineer. I would like to thank you for your guidance with the furniture purchase, and I got an extra ten

percent

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discount after mentioning your reference. The store manager said that you have been their frequent customer. Yours sincerely Jennifer

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2Word repetition
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6Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

185 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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A letter to a landlord requesting permission to make changes to your rented home

Fully explain your ideas

level of youth crime is increasing day by day around the world. Give some reasons and some solutions to stop it.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Some people say that school should reward students who show the best academic results, while other believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.